如何寫英語B級作文
如何寫英語B級作文
信函是考生備考的重點。主要應(yīng)對措施是掌握各類應(yīng)用文的套句,今天小編就給大家分享一下作文句子的應(yīng)用寫法,希望能幫助到即將要考英語B級的同學們。
一、作文開頭
萬能句
1、With the development of technology and science,隨著科學技術(shù)的發(fā)展(后
面一定要接句子,不能單獨使用)
With the growth \progress of technology and science= Coincident with theadvancement of science and technology.
2、Considering the worsening situation in China, attention must be poured inoprotecting the environment.(考慮到中國越來越壞的情況,環(huán)境保護需要引起更
多的重視。)
3、The first five years of the new century witnessed the increasing developmtof China.(本世紀的頭五年見證了中國的快速發(fā)展。)
As the global economy
grows at a fever pitch,……
4、Coincident with the fast growing national economy, there exists an
unfavorable and prevalent phenomenon in China.
5、There are growing concern for ……
6、In recent years, it is common to see\hear that ……
7、There is a general tendency that……(有一種趨勢)
二、作文內(nèi)容的陳述
結(jié)構(gòu)in the first place/ secondly/ on top of that
以下手段是增加句子復雜性的常見方法,也是得高分的“亮點”。
1.改變句子的開頭方式,不要一味地都是主語開頭,接著是謂語、賓語,最后再加一個狀語??梢园褷钫Z置于句首,或用分詞做狀語等。
〔原文〕We met at the school gate and went there together early in themornig.?
〔修正〕Early in the morning we met at the school gate and went theretogeter.
〔原文〕The young man couldn’t help crying when he heard the bad news.?
〔修正〕Hearing the bad news, the young man couldn’t help crying.?
2.在整篇文章中,避免只使用一兩個句式,要靈活運用諸如倒裝句、強調(diào)句主
從復合句、分詞狀語等。
①強調(diào)句
〔原文〕I met him in the street yesterday?
〔修正〕It was in the street that I met him yesterday.
It was yesterday that I met him in the street.
②由with或without引導的短語。
如: He sat in a chair with a newspaper in the hand.
?、鄯衷~短語。
如:Satisfied with the result,He decided to go on with a new experiment.?
?、艿寡b句。
如: Only in this way can we achieve our goal.
Never before have seen such a wonderful film.
Not only should we study in the college, but also learn how to be a decent
person.
?、菔÷跃?。如:
If so,victory will be ours.
You can make some changes wherever necessary.
3.通過分句和合句,增強句子的連貫性和表現(xiàn)力
〔原文〕He stopped us half an hour ago. He made us catch the next offender.
〔修正〕He stopped us half an hour ago and made us catch the next
offender.
〔原文〕We had a short rest. Then we began to play happily. We sang and
danced.
Some told stories. Some played chess
〔修正〕After a short rest,we had great fun singing and dancing, telling jokes and playing chess.注意使用不同長度的句子,要結(jié)合使用,不能只用短句
或只用長句。
4.學會使用過渡詞。如:①遞進: then(然后), besides(還有),furthermore(而且),moreover(此外)等。
?、谵D(zhuǎn)折: however(然而), but(但是), on the contrary (相反),after all(畢竟)等
?、劭偨Y(jié): finally(最后), at last(最后), in brief(總之),in conclusion(最后)等。
?、軓娬{(diào): indeed(確實), certainly(一定), surely(確定), above all(尤其)等。
?、輰Ρ? in the same way(同樣地),just as(正如), on the onehand…on the ther hand(一方面……另一方面……)等。
相似的比較:similarly, in the same manner
相反的比較:on the other hand,conversely, whereas, while, instead, nevertheless, in contrast, on the contrary,compared with …,
5.注意使用詞組、習語來代替一些單詞,以增加文采。如:
〔原文〕A new railway is being built in my hometown.
〔修正〕A new railway is under construction in my hometown.
6.避免重復使用某一單詞或短語。如:
〔原文〕I like reading while my brother likes watching television.
〔修正〕I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.
I like reading while watching television appeals to my brother.
三、結(jié)尾
1、All in all, what really matters is, in fact, that……(比如說到和諧社會All in
al,what really matters is, in fact, that we should build our society a harmonios
society.)
2、Therefore, it’s not difficult to draw a conclusion that……
3、As a result , we should take effective measures to do sth.(我們必須采取
一些有效的措施來做些什么)
4、 From what has been discussed above , we may conclude that ……
5、 Obviously(此為過渡短語), we can draw the conclusion that good maners。arise from politeness and respect for others.
Directions: This part is to test your ability to do practical writing. You are required to write a letter based on the following information given in Chinese. Remember to do your writing on the Translation/Composition Sheet.
英語范文
你想在課余時間參加職業(yè)技術(shù)培訓,現(xiàn)給菲亞特公司去信了解該公司職業(yè)維修中心(vocation repair center)的情況。內(nèi)容如下:
1) 了解汽車修理培訓課程;喜歡擺弄汽車,并想成為一名機械師;
2) 準備參加9月至12月的一期;因為周一至周五學校要上課,只能周末參加培訓;
3) 索取詳盡資料及申請表。
參考范文:
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am writing to ask for information about training courses in automobile repair that your Vocation Repair Center offers. I enjoy working with cars and would like to train to be a mechanic.
I would like to take the course from September to December but I can only study in the evenings because I have a full?time learning course in my college.
I would appreciate if you send me details and an application form.
Yours sincerely,
Jiang Peng