托福寫作開頭怎樣用兩方觀點描述
托福寫作一個很大的部分就是開頭的好壞,先不論托福綜合寫作模板中的一些寫法,學生們托福寫作開頭中怎樣陳述兩房觀點呢?下面是小編給大家?guī)淼耐懈懽鏖_頭怎樣用兩方觀點描述,希望能幫到大家!
托福寫作開頭怎樣用兩方觀點描述
那么我們都知道,一篇較好的托福作文需要字數(shù)達到400-450左右,然而我們的規(guī)定時間只有短短的30分鐘,可想而知,托福寫作的字數(shù)壓力還是比較大的。所以我們建議,開頭段不應(yīng)該占據(jù)太多時間,我們應(yīng)該多留一些時間給后面主體段的擴展,讓文章更加充實。通常開頭段的要求是字數(shù)在70-100詞左右,時間控制在3-5分鐘。不排除有些學生拿到題目就能文思泉涌的敲出一篇開頭,但是對于大多數(shù)學生來說,緊張的時間再加上緊張的情緒,在開頭段就會卡殼。那么針對這大多數(shù)的情況,我們有沒有什么解決辦法呢?今天,我們就介紹一種比較好用的適用于開頭的托福綜合寫作模版,這種方法有個專業(yè)的名字叫做“背景爭議法”。
既然名字都叫背景爭議了,那么大家猜猜看,這個方法大致能分為幾個部分呢?首先是背景,何謂背景,也是就一種引入話題的高超技術(shù);其次是爭議,什么叫爭議,也就是你同意我不同意,這個部分就是正反方觀點;最后,再回到我們所強調(diào)的開頭的主要任務(wù),最重要的是表明自己的立場。那么總結(jié)來說,背景爭議法的三要素就是背景、正反方觀點和個人觀點。那么接下來我們用一個題目來看看,這種方法要怎么使用。
Do you agree or disagree: money is the most important aspect in a job?
首先拿到這個題目,我們可以看到要談?wù)摰氖清X對于工作的重要性,那么在開頭段我們要如何引入話題呢?我們可以這樣寫:
In contemporary society, it has become a hot issue that whether money is the most important aspect in a job. People’s opinions about it vary from person to person.
“在現(xiàn)代社會,錢到底是不是工作中最重要的部分,這個話題引起了大家的熱烈討論,大家的觀點各不相同”。很顯然,這是個引入主題的好方法。
接下來是正反方觀點,也就是一些人同意而另一些人不同意的部分了:
A number of supporters of that viewpoint claim that money is very important on account of its necessity to satisfy our daily needs, but other people who are opposite to that view hold that other factors like interest and social liability are also significant aspects in a job.
可以看到,我們在托福寫作范文中介紹各方觀點的時候可以適當?shù)募由弦幌履憧梢韵氲降暮唵卫碛蓙韼臀覀兲畛溟_頭。
最后一部分是個人觀點,也就是表達自己看法的時候,大家對于這個應(yīng)該是非常擅長了,無非就是就我個人來說,我的看法是什么:
As for as I am concerned, I am convinced that money is not always the most important.
我們可以看到,背景爭議法的開頭寫法結(jié)構(gòu)和思路都是非常清晰的。
通過上面的介紹,我們可以發(fā)現(xiàn):作為托福寫作的開頭段落是至關(guān)重要的,我們不應(yīng)該只是單純的套用托福寫作范文中的句式,這樣顯得非常生硬。在時間緊迫的情況下,我們可以使用這個托福綜合寫作模板中的背景爭議法來處理開頭段落。
列舉4個托福寫作中常用到的主體段素材
主體段的寫作經(jīng)常是很多同學頭疼的問題。很多情況下因為一時之間想不到論證論據(jù)而導致作文失敗的事例時有發(fā)生。這就要求同學們在平時備考的時候一定要多多積累相關(guān)的論證論據(jù),以備不時之需。比如今天小編為大家例舉的這些例證就是我們平時作文中經(jīng)常可以用到的。
(一)Winston Churchill
In the early 1930s, Conservative M.P. Winston Churchill issued unheeded warnings of the threat of Nazi aggression from his seat on a House of Commons backbench.
With German tanks racing across France, Churchill spoke to the British people for the first time as prime minister, and pledged a struggle to the last breath against Nazi conquest and oppression.
In the summer of 1940, the democracies of continental Europe fell to Germany one by one, leaving Great Britain alone in its resistance to Adolf Hitler. The Nazi leader was confident that victory against Britain would come soon, but Churchill prophesied otherwise, telling his countrymen that the Battle of Britain would be "their finest hour."
(二)Bill Clinton
In 1994, President Clinton authorized a military operation to overthrow Haiti's military dictators and restore its democratically elected leader. On the eve of invasion, bloodshed was prevented when former president Jimmy Carter brokered an agreement with Haiti's leaders in which they pledged to give up power.
(三)Stephen Hawking
Hawking is certainly the most famous physicist in history who has not won the Nobel Prize. This is because the Swedish Royal Academy demands that an award-winning discovery must be supported by verifiable experimental or observational evidence. Hawking's work, to date, remains unproved.
Hawking has made his reputation by investigating, in great detail, one particular set of problems: the singularity and horizons around black holes and at the beginning of time. The idea that the universe had a specific time of origin has been philosophically resisted by some very distinguished scientists.
首先,這些名人都是我們平時很多文章里面可以用來論證的點,其次,這些生平的描寫都非常精煉達意。如果我們平時多積累,到需要的時候直接拿出來就比我們自己寫要來得更快更準確了。
除了名人之外著名的事例也是很好的例證。比如看下面這個。
American Civil War
The American Civil War erupted when southern states seceded from the Union in order to form their own nation. The North's ultimate victory preserved the Union, abolished slavery, and granted citizenship to newly freed slaves. The Civil War also marked the economic and political ascendancy of the rapidly industrializing states of the North.