中考英語(yǔ)高分作文怎么寫(xiě)
英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)作是學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)的一個(gè)盲點(diǎn),缺乏對(duì)寫(xiě)作的專(zhuān)門(mén)訓(xùn)練和反思,老師的工作量大,造成作文講評(píng)大多數(shù)時(shí)候只談現(xiàn)象,因此學(xué)生學(xué)得也不具體、不深入,忽略寫(xiě)作技能的提高,甚至誤認(rèn)為只要句子結(jié)構(gòu)正確,無(wú)單詞拼寫(xiě)錯(cuò)誤就應(yīng)該得滿分。接下來(lái),小編給大家準(zhǔn)備了中考英語(yǔ)高分作文怎么寫(xiě),歡迎大家參考與借鑒。
中考英語(yǔ)高分作文
一、寫(xiě)作決竅
總體把握,要點(diǎn)齊全;人稱(chēng)時(shí)態(tài),邏輯清楚;
關(guān)鍵詞匯,動(dòng)詞第一;組詞成句,結(jié)構(gòu)完整;
組句成文,連詞增色;此路不通,繞道迂回;
字跡工整,留好印象;從句適量,高分有望。
二、寫(xiě)作步驟
1. 認(rèn)真審題。審題包括要點(diǎn)、格式、詞數(shù)以及此篇文章要傳遞給讀者什么樣的信息,告誡讀者什么(即寫(xiě)作目的)。
2. 確定文體和時(shí)態(tài)。確定文體后,根據(jù)不同文體的特點(diǎn)和要求進(jìn)行組織材料;同時(shí)確定出該篇文章的總時(shí)態(tài)與時(shí)態(tài)的變化。
3. 寫(xiě)完要點(diǎn),但不隨意發(fā)揮。
4. 先草稿,后抄寫(xiě)。
三、習(xí)作點(diǎn)評(píng)
[2004年全國(guó)中學(xué)生英語(yǔ)能力競(jìng)賽初賽初三組] (14分)
Choose one of your hobbies and write an article1 for the school magazine2 about it. Tell the magazine readers3.
﹒What exactly4 your hobby is;
﹒When and how you became5 interested7 in this hobby;
﹒Why you enjoy your hobby;
﹒About your hopes9 and plans11 for the future12.
寫(xiě)作要求:
1. 根據(jù)所提供的內(nèi)容,適當(dāng)拓展想象空間,靈活地將提供的信息體現(xiàn)在文章中。
2. 條理清楚,語(yǔ)句通順,書(shū)寫(xiě)清晰、規(guī)范。
3. 詞數(shù)60-80。
[學(xué)生習(xí)作A]
My hobby is read books. When I was13 seven years old .
I became interested in reading16 books. I like needing books
because there are a lot of useful17 things in books. I can learn
a lot of knowledge18 from books. Books also can teach me
how to be a good person19 . Books even15 can solve20 many
problems21 for me . I will read more good books to improve22
myself23.
?、俑臑閞eading books,動(dòng)詞作表語(yǔ)時(shí)應(yīng)該用動(dòng)名詞。
?、赼lso的位置應(yīng)放在can之后。
[點(diǎn)評(píng)]:檔次9-11分。
?、僖c(diǎn)不全,漏掉最后一個(gè)要點(diǎn)。
?、诰渥踊緹o(wú)誤,能正確傳遞信息給讀者但文章不流暢,句子與句子之間過(guò)渡不自然,給讀者感覺(jué)在回答上述① ② ③問(wèn)題。
?、塾猩倭垮e(cuò)誤。
[學(xué)生習(xí)作B]
My hobby is reading .Reading books is very enjoyable24 .
When I was young ,my mother used25 to tell me a story before
I went to bed every night .The stories were so interesting
that I always felt they weren't enough . So I began to read
books by myself .Little by little I became interested in
reading . I can learn much knowledge and many interesting
things all over the world .When I read books , I can enjoy the
beautiful sentences26 . At the same time I can improve my
writing27 . I want to be a writer28 in the future , so I must study
hard and read more books so that my dream29 can come true30 .
①開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山、點(diǎn)題。
?、谡媲榱髀?,理由充分。
?、畚闹袔Φ倪B詞使用得恰當(dāng),使文章過(guò)渡自然、
?、芮擅钍褂镁湫鸵员頉Q心。
[點(diǎn)評(píng)]:檔次13-14分。
?、偾宄磉_(dá)寫(xiě)作目的,要點(diǎn)齊全。
?、谡Z(yǔ)言表達(dá)靈活多樣,字里行間流露出真情實(shí)感,文章有感染力。
?、矍‘?dāng)使用連詞和從句,語(yǔ)言流暢,且無(wú)錯(cuò)誤,是一篇高質(zhì)量的作文。
[高分突破]
?、傥捏w:記敘文。
②要點(diǎn):what → when →how → why → hope8 and plan10 for the future。
?、蹠r(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí),一般過(guò)去時(shí),一般將來(lái)時(shí)的自然變化。
內(nèi)容具有開(kāi)放性,但它也是“控制性”的寫(xiě)作試題,因此不能隨意發(fā)揮,要善于抓信息,寫(xiě)完要點(diǎn)。選用這兩篇學(xué)生真實(shí)習(xí)作,一是因?yàn)樗麄冞x材相同,二是因?yàn)樗麄兌际怯⒄Z(yǔ)成績(jī)優(yōu)秀的同學(xué)。同學(xué)B靈活使用連詞so…that, so, little by little, when, so that等,恰到好處地使用新句型和短語(yǔ)used to, became interested in, come true……等,使內(nèi)容豐富,讀起來(lái)優(yōu)美流暢。其實(shí)這些表達(dá)同學(xué)A也會(huì),只是缺乏技術(shù)加工。通過(guò)這兩篇作文點(diǎn)評(píng),同學(xué)們便能悟出其中的奧妙。
四、培養(yǎng)途徑
1. 根據(jù)老師布置的寫(xiě)作內(nèi)容,獨(dú)立完成一篇寫(xiě)作。
2. 與同伴合作,交流自己的寫(xiě)作,通過(guò)交流找出各自作文中寫(xiě)得好的地方和優(yōu)美的句子,合作創(chuàng)造一篇新的文章,供大家欣賞。
3. 找老師點(diǎn)評(píng),請(qǐng)求老師指點(diǎn),尤其是怎樣潤(rùn)色。
4. 自己糾錯(cuò),寫(xiě)下反思。
五、備考演練
A
縉云山是重慶著名的游覽勝地,每天有大量的游客。請(qǐng)你根據(jù)下面提供的信息寫(xiě)一篇報(bào)道,說(shuō)明現(xiàn)在的游客在環(huán)境保護(hù)方面的變化。
寫(xiě)作要求:
1. 詞數(shù)在100左右。
2. 條理清楚,語(yǔ)句通順。
3. 開(kāi)頭已寫(xiě)好,但不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Jinyun Mountain is a famous31 place of interest6 …
B
閱讀電視廣告詞:“If we don’t save32 water , the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.”根據(jù)提示,寫(xiě)一篇60-80詞的短文。
提示:
1. 生活離不開(kāi)水。
2. 可飲用水在減少。
3. 水污染嚴(yán)重。
4. 應(yīng)保護(hù)水源,再利用水。?箏 思路點(diǎn)撥與參考答案 ?箏
A. [思路點(diǎn)撥]:
?、傥捏w:記敘文。
②時(shí)態(tài):一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài),一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。采用正反對(duì)比的寫(xiě)作手法,增加感染力。
?、蹖?xiě)作目的:告訴讀者保護(hù)環(huán)境的重要性。
Jinyun Mountain is a famous place of interest . Every day a lot of tourists33 come here to enjoy its beauty34. But a few35 years ago,some of them paid36 no attention37 to protecting39 the environment40. They threw their rubbish41,such as14 plastic42 bags,fruit skins43 and waste44 paper on the ground45. Sometimes they broke46 trees,picked flowers and killed47 birds. Some even made48 fires in the woods to cook food. How dangerous it was. Luckily, great changes have taken place here. Tourists are used to putting their rubbish into dustbins49, and they are doing their best to protect38 the birds and plants as well. They bring their own50 meals51 instead52 of cooking53 to prevent54 starting a forest55 fire in the mountains. All these changes make us very happy.
B. [思路點(diǎn)撥]:
?、賷A敘夾議(說(shuō)明現(xiàn)狀,談?wù)劯邢?。
?、跁r(shí)態(tài):一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
?、蹚V告詞的含義——水很重要,應(yīng)保護(hù)和再利用(寫(xiě)作意圖)。
Water is very important56 to humans57. We can’t live without water. The water we can drink is falling. But some people don’t seem58 to care59 about it. They waste a lot of water. They pour60 dirty water into rivers and lakes. Water pollution61 is getting more and more serious62. So we must do something to stop the pollution. We not only protect the water but also find ways to reuse63 it. If we don’t do this, the last drop of water will be a tear-drop.
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